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A New Beginning

From the depths of utmost hatred,
A new hope, a new dream comes to be.
From the pits of distrust and despair,
A new love arises for all the world to see.
The shadows try to hold it down,
To suppress it to the fullest extent.
Society's chains can not hold it now,
This true feeling is a real God-sent.
The fellowship of the church holds true,
The brothers of nations unite.
With the blessing bestowed upon us by God,
Let us stand and deliver, let us win the fight.
May we stand tall like a great redwood tree,
Hold steady and strong like the bold oak.
Shall we stand and win the fight with a resolution of peace,
Not to be blinded by the vicious gun smoke.

Author notes

If you read, please comment. This is a poem that I hope will spark your imagination, and give you  new outlook on the world. I hope that someone understands the idea I was trying to get across.
Written June 5th, 2005

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Comments

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  • FullyAlive
    July 20, 2005
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    wow... another instant favorite of mine... thats the first poem of yours i read... so ill be reading more... wowness thats great... i love it...

    bexa


  • bootyliciouse
    July 16, 2005
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    omg that is a gr8t poem never ever stop writing


  • xX I Am A Banana Xx
    July 1, 2005
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    That is deep.Beautiful if u ask me. Your very talented....I wish i could write like you. Please feel free to view some of my poems,Thanks.
    Edited on Jul 01, 2:49 because 'i spell "Very" and "Write" wronge.'.


  • chanterai
    June 12, 2005
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    Majestic.

    I liked this..it was very majestic and had some very grand images. So much power can be exuded in words..it's amazing. This poem is a great example of that sentiment. Keep up the amazing work..you're so talented, even though you don't think so! lol =)


  • Meleth
    June 8, 2005
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    Great Job! You're a better writer than you let me believe. Anyways,i've now read all of your poems that you have posted and i love them all! I even cried through some of them. You're a very talented writer!
    Somegirl1110


  • Shadow-Flame
    June 7, 2005
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    You can not agree with your opwn view? LOL This is no ordinary piece. This is to be interpreted by each reader in his or her own way. ^^
    ~Spike~


  • June 7, 2005
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    Winner!

    Ummm...What?
    In truth, well done, although I can't agree with the veiw, it's definitely well written.

  • Glu
    June 6, 2005
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    Definitely worth the wait, my friend. Beautifully done.

  • angelbaby47
    June 5, 2005
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    this is a nice poem but not everything is forgivable. at least not easily. thats how I view this. good write though. Angelbaby47

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