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Thank You

Thank you, dear friend,
for everything you've done.

You may not even notice,
but you've saved me in almost every way possible.

From my fears,
From my doubts,
From myself.

A temporary paradise,
away from misery.

You listened to me when no one else would.
Listened about ideas,
Listened about problems,
Even listened about complaints.

We laugh about ourselves,
about our stupid mistakes.
About the dumbest situations we've gotten into.

I feel unworthy to be your friend sometimes.
But that's just my emo side talking.


Our plans for the future,
will hopefully come true someday.

Until then,
there's one thing that I need to say.

Thank you, dear friend,
for everything you've done.

Author notes

No you're not hallucinating, I actually *did* write a happy poem.

Uhh, yeah. The poem is pretty self-explainatory.
Written June 5th, 2005

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  • Ninque-Aiwe
    September 2, 2005
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    I'm reviewing again, because with the free goldmembership week, i'm putting in links.

    THANKYOU, MAN!!! YOU ARE THE MOST AWESOME AWESOMEST DUDE WHO'S EVER WALKED THE EARTH! I LOVE YOU!!
    Yeah...

  • Jumbie
    June 9, 2005
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    The blue is REEEEEEEEEALY hurting my eyes....


  • AmethystRose
    June 9, 2005
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    thats a really sweet poem its great, always good to write a happy one once in a while, best freinds are gems

  • Ninque-Aiwe
    June 6, 2005
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    *Thinks* *Think more for the risk of extreme embarrassment* *Asks you* Okay. NOW, you have led me to safely assume that this was for me.
    I don't know how to react except... I feel special. And, you're welcome? Shannon, thankYOU for writing this. You have the ability to make me happy when I'm depressed to, you know? Because misery loves company, and even if we're both down, we're there together.
    I really like this line "I feel unworthy to be your friend sometimes. But that's just my emo side talking." No you don't. You have an emo side?! (of course you do!) EMO RANGERS, Here, to! Wait, what?
    DUDE, the backround is BLUE! You hate blue.
    You need... The Ninque-Aiwe Award ! How could I /not/ give you one?
    And I need to give you a hug next time I see you.