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A Magical Memo

Missing image
To: Magic Lady
From: Mr. Peacock

Message:

I  just want you to know
that your going away
in no way upsets me
because I know you will stay

close to your dear friends
and family here at AP
even though you're leaving Texas
we're your forever family.

Now don't stay away too long.
We need you here everyday.
Your contests are fun
and your poetry and what you say

are what we look for
when we open our page.
So sweet Magic Lady
now that I'm out of my cage

I say goodbye for a moment
and wish you every good thing.
I'm showing off my best colors
and for you I will continue to sing.

HURRY BACK!
We miss you already!
Love from all your friends at AP!

Author notes

I took this picture of this peacock on Thursday on a field trip and just had to use it for Magic Lady. We love you!
Written June 5th, 2005

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  • darkworld4ever
    June 15, 2005
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    I like it. I like how you describe how you feel about her at the same time describing her. lol I love the meaning too. Also, thanks for your comment
    -Megan, MK, Dark


  • OutsideTheMirror
    June 8, 2005
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    i like how it's a meaage and a poem at the same time *points out obvious* lovely write


  • MagicLady silver member
    June 6, 2005
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    The male peacock is so beautiful. I am so pleased that you got such a great photo of him in his full plumage.
    Thank you for writing such a lovely poem for me. I am always so pleased with the time and effort people take to write poems for me. It is such a humbling experience. You did such a wonderful job with this poem, thank you.

    Cheryl Cheers!


  • Samplette gold member
    June 6, 2005
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    This is lovely...a wonderful touch added to the others. I saw my first wild "free" peacock last week...he was calling out to someone..it was beautiful. I wanted so much to see him fly, but my hubby wouldn't pull over. This was wonderful. Thank you for sharing it in the contest.
    Sam


  • Vickie J
    June 5, 2005
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    Soooo beautiful, Joanne. Cheryl will no doubt love this send off write. It's even more special b/c of the picture you have taken and placed at the top...and the parrots down the side-so colorful-makes me just wanna hang out for a while.

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