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Let it Rain

drip drop
           drip drop
Let the sprinkles fall
And quench my need to be cleansed
Let it be natural
Never to be feigned
        No copies, no fakes
of the sounds
   drip... drop...
                  drip... drop...
For it is the rhythm of my soul
   -the beat of my heart-

I wish to drown in the raindrops of your love!
Let it fall upon me
            and wash away my lusts and passions
for anyone at all
                      but you.

Author notes

um..
I know romance poems are really of a cliche
but this poem can be used for anyone and anything

for worship
for the person you love
for nature.. i suppose..

thats why im posting it
i hope u like it
Written June 5th, 2005

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