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Their First Time Alone

Their first time alone,
Left them breathless,
Endlessly panting,
Screaming,
And begging for more.

Their first time alone,
Called for passion,
Hot sweet seduction,
Writhing,
In pleasurable anguish.

Their limbs twisted,
As backs arched,
And moans echoed,
Through the night,
As two bodies,
Melded as one,
Breast against breast,
Tongue within each cavity,
Wanting it to never end.

Their first time alone,
Shouted forbidden desires,
Two similar beings,
As one,
Crying each other's name in delight.

Their first time alone,
Brought her hands to stroke succulent breasts,
Brought her fingers within the other,
Thrusting,
Into each sensation.

Their cries were endless,
Sweet forbidden pleasures fulfilled,
Living hidden dreams,
Making the fantasies all real.
Grinding and kissing,
Against every inch of flesh,
Only "wondrous" could describe that time.

Their first time alone,
And they had realised,
Lusting passion,
Steamy,
Wondrous sex with a similar female.

Their first time alone,
Took two virgins,
Stole their last bit of innocence,
Gladly,
As they had wanted it to be.

Their orgasmic cries,
Shouted to the heavens,
Laughing amidst the pain and pleasure,
Twisting each word and falling to desires,
They made their first time alone,
The most memorable night of their lives.
The best experience they had as one,
They made their first time alone,
Become their first time as female lovers.

Author notes

Yea. Hot lesbian sex is great, no? Please comment and such and check out some of my other shitty poems if you will. Thank you.
Written June 5th, 2005

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Comments

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  • Danny VooDoo
    June 22, 2005
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    very hot and steamy sheesh why did i have 2 be male

    fantastic write well done

    ~Danny


  • Pissed Off Witch
    June 7, 2005
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    Beautiful imagery I must say...kinda makes me wish I still wasn't a virgin -_- a truly amazing work of art. I applaud you.

  • Morgan Disselle
    June 6, 2005
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    sexualy beautiful

    so far THIS IS MY FAVORITE POEM,I HAVE IT ON MY FAV.it is sexualy beautiful.its like you gave vivid detail.awesome!


  • insane1
    June 5, 2005
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    dats HOT
    in capital letterz
    wow...im jealous of them...lol
    -sarah

  • Rose of the Fallen
    June 5, 2005
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    Thank you muches! ^^x Im glad you liked it... EEP! Now I must change the bg!


  • Arsenic-
    June 5, 2005
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    Sigh, that was beautiful. It entranced me. Well done.

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