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Cry Myself To Sleep

Awful stares
Rejectipon
Hurt
Humiliation
A jelous green slut
Screaming to get out
Black rimmed eyes
Thrashing about
Too much makeup
Too little clothes
A pile of homework
A ring in my nose
Getting home late
Locking myself away
Staying in the medical room all of the day
At the end of it all
I lie awake
A single tear running down my cheek
And cry myself to sleep

Author notes

Hey everyone - Just a little bit about how I feel. I'll write more whenever.
Written June 5th, 2005

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  • gprcrower
    June 15, 2005
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    Dummy.
    I liked this, but I want to be the one to take you for yer nose peircing. God, dont tell MOM I said that.

  • paris-potter
    June 14, 2005
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    When I said Streaker I meant Street Worker. Lol

  • paris-potter
    June 14, 2005
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    Thanks Sox, I try hard. Bunny was actually.. well... it was a word for a girl who wears a little LITTLE bit of clothes, and looks like a... um... streaker. Like a vally girl. Or Regina George from Mean Girls.

  • what have i done
    June 12, 2005
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    wow, thats really good

  • shortyburdeau
    June 12, 2005
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    i loved you poem but you misspelled alittle in there but keep up the great work

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