i sit here looking through this family album,
there are picture of everyone,
baby pictures, birthday parties, graduation pictures,
there are pictures even of the dog,
as i continue to turn the pages,
i notice something...
there are pictures of everyone but me!
have i not been part of this family! why
aren't there any pictures of me! what do u not
want to remember me too. my birthday pictures,
my graduation, my baby pictures! where are they,
what have you done to them, did u purposely lose
them so i wont be remembered! then again i don't care
what you did with them because i don't want to be just
a girl in a picture of your album,no, i want to be
remembered for what i contributed to this family and
by what i did.
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Written June 5th, 2005
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very nice write, i can acctually imagine someone flipping through a album, i wonder if that will be my faith? i don't know...but this was a real nice write, KEEP WRITING!!!
Pain Never Resists
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awww thi is sad . i know what u mean though .. keep it up!
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Hmm... I think you were actually going somewhere very interesting with this piece. However, I didn't much like the way you've presented it. It's not very... well, 'poetic', for lack of a better term lol. More of a rant, actually. Other than that, though... the piece was really rather innovative. Remember... maybe they just kept all your pictures in a special place because they love you more
. Nice work, and keep it up, dear
~Smidge~
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