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Surrender

Skye, I release my pain and cares, love
Up to you goes my will and heart
Relinquish my name for you
Rush to fill your command
Each day I hand you
Now help me serve
Dream that you're
Ever
Right

Author notes

Acrostic Nonet for Skye. I'm a Bronze Member.
Written June 5th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • PeopleAlwaysLeave
    July 6, 2005
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    It was a good write and a beautiful nonet! Keep writing


  • SusanL
    June 17, 2005
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    This was a very lovely nonet. You used the form to it's fullest. It is one I am fond of because of the visual impact.
    You have incorporated your acrostic word as your theme nicely and overall I was glad that you took the time to write this for us.
    I hope the person it was written for got the same pleasure reading this as I did.
    Susan


  • macandrew
    June 15, 2005
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    very good

    Very well done. A beautiful love poem.

    thanks for entering.
    John


  • Itsalie
    June 11, 2005
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    very good

    Nicely written. I will have to look up the rules for the nonet but the poem was filled with wonderful sentiment.

    thanks,
    Talia