Let Go
The glass confounding
O the penetrating lies
Fear steers the soul astray
Finding holes to hide and abide
Fear of growing real
And am I well in this
The ocean comes to us
The all flowing light
O the gate I have caressed
Know well the vibration
Seek it and let go
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Written June 4th, 2005
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A beautiful and well writte poem
Keep writing, this was really deep
All the best,
Thanks for your comment
Pozo
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Letting go is often hard, material things are easier to let go of than emotional, spiritual, physical things. You've written a very profound piece here, dark search.
I glean a deeper meaning than I've touched on in my comment, much deeper... but I'm tired and it's getting late... hard to concentrate. Suffice to say that this is an extraordinary work, one which I enjoyed reading.
Dee
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Thank you greatly for you thoughts Zee1...hope i can recipricate the favor soon...i am glad you understod my exprience and my work..
dark search
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Letting go of the tangible and intangible in our lives is certainly one of the most difficult things to do, but it releases us, making us freer to experience and enjoy. Fear is one of the key words, as you put it "of growing real" is the issue. A great piece - well done.
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thank you for you thought on my work dragon...much appreciated
dark search -
I am very glad it is real for you...my aware friend ...i would enjoy hearing more of your thoughts on my work here...thankyou for stopping by..
dark search -
very shakespearean and very informational about hwo we must let go of just the physical things in life and seek understanding that all things dont only effect us on a superficial level. Very deep and commiting. You are a very knowledgeable person. Well done!
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You have written a great piece....so real for me....physically and spiritually it captures me....why do we hang on, it is so much harder to hang on.....once we realize letting go makes us open for so much more in life, we become more real to ourselves and others.....cross over to the better side of life....it is what we make of it....great job.....enjoyed.
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Excellent poem, and soem really deep comments to, they've pretty much said all the thought going through my mind as well. Many thanks for posting it.
Take care
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This is just fabuluos it is very enchanting and mystical. What a beautiful piece of poetry though short very touching.
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Sometimes we have to keep our feet and spirit here on earth. Else we lose sight of why we are here
Very well written and quite deep, as usual. You may have been away, but you have not lost your touch. Great piece!
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Some things?...my friend we must let go of everything...embrace the void...thank you for you thoughts and for reading this...you understood the surface meaning...and that is great for now...
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bon
Very good in my opinion, i had to read it twice to actually get the message, but I finally got it. Very short, but sweet and cool, its always good to let go of some things. Keep up the good poetry! -
i see
one letting go all the pain within their lives
somehow putting it behind
focasing on one's life
and starting again. Interesting perspective!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
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thank you for your comments and thoughts roseofpain
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very thoughtful and insightful. isnt it amazing what fear can do to someone, almost swallowing them completely? i love the images too!
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thank you greatly little lark for your encouraging comments...
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Beautiful
This was wonderful. Just the thing I needed to read this morning. Thank you! I love the imagery behind it all. Wonderful. -
Awesome
I love this poem, it is awesome, A job well done, please continue writing and have a good day! -
Well done!!
Trappings, unique flavored in personal circumstance become here the voice flavored in respite and graceful imagery ... "The ocean comes to us
The all flowing light
O the gate I have caressed" lovely... brava Wishing you and yours much success in all of your endeavors
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I liked this. I liked this alot. There was just something about it that impacted and left my all sighy. Great job.
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