i want it now!
i want diamonds,
i want a car,
i want lots of clothes,
i want a bigger house,
and if i had the chance to get all
of these things ,I'd take it.
why? because i want everything!
but, in a heartbeat...
i would give it all up for YOU!
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Written June 4th, 2005
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wowie, would you really? that's so sweet, now come on give it to me, i'm waiting, lolx, i am just playing, this a short but sweet poem with a twist at the end,, very straight forward....this was a very nice write, KEEP WRITNG!!!
Angel or Devil?
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good
Reminded me of Varuka Salt in Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.She said I want it and I want it now lol.great poem and so true about love though.If you really love someone money is not the top priority.
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EXCELLENT!
Oh this is great!
I especially like the ending 'I'd give it up for you.'
That's a wonderful way of looking at it.
Thanks for sharing this. You're a great writer;
both of you!
God bless.
Brian -
kool i like cute yet simple lol
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Cool
wow....your a spaz lol! But this is kinda sweet and kind of funny. Its like making you out to be conceded but the last line says otherwise. Cool.
~Guise
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