Stop taking this so seriously.
You knew it'd end eventually.
When my whole world is crumbling down,
Falling into pieces from above me,
It's taken me so long to realize
I could've done without your lies.
So for the both of you.
I don't know what else to do.
Your unnecessary comments
And unnecessary judgments
Don't you understand it?
No one gives a shit.
Go cry to the world through your own venue
But don't come to me when you need someone to talk to.
Some may say that I am heartless
But when they hear what I have gone through
I'm sure they'll think it's progress
And I'm so completely over you
Goodbye to two.
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yay for losing
1... a friend
2... the boyfriend.
Written June 4th, 2005
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...thanks.
Edited on Jun 06, 3:22 p.m. because ''. -
this has absolutely nothing to do with you not being "good enough." You came to that conclusion yourself. I never once said it.
The way that I put things in my poems is a lot better than the way you described me in yours. So, we know how we feel about one another and I don't really care anymore. You may say that in the beginning of your comment but you continue to dramatize everything...
I'm not taking it anymore.
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no really, this is the last time i'm saying anything to you.
I'm glad it's over, really I am. I feel like I don't have to look up to you anymore, like I used to.
So, really, goodbye to you too. My god it's not like I freaking traumatized you. My god you act like I was just soooooooo bad.
But i just wish you would have listened to my last comment, but appearently it wasn't good enough. So OH FUCKING WELL.
Edited on Jun 05, 7:10 because 'grammer mistake'. -
great
yay for sure? not really so much...
great poem loved it for sure
i hope things get better
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