eternal bliss
wrapped in softness ~~
her eyes
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Written June 3rd, 2005
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Thanks vaseline 
I'm so happy you stopped by...
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You've got some really nice poetry sir.
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short and sweet huh??
I just have to ask...how in the world did you choose your ap name? I love it...although might not fit myself..lol...since I'm five feet ten...female...not a monk..or a nun even...lol..not that there's anything against them..I'm sure monks and nuns are very nice.
great little poem...
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Hey,aww i like this,its sweet.great write,and thanks for entering my contest,good luck!! ~Laura
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a poem that makes ya go "mmmmmm" :-)
nice
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Awwwwww...thanks for the kind words, vic. You are right...haiku is nature-based poetry. This poem is actually a senryu...a poem that has the form and structure of haiku, but the subject is about human nature / emotions. Unfortunately, AP doesn't have a "senryu" catagory, so it's under haiku
Thanks again for your encouragement, my friend
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5 Stars *****
hello nice friend
well i am not into haiku's much.. i mean i cant write them
( never tried though ) .. but hey .. i loved your haiku.. its really brilliant.. has greta impact on readers mind.. i loved it..tottally ..
one query.. just.. isnt it that haiku's should only be on nature? ( just asking... for my own knwledge )
take cares and have anice time my dear friend.. just keep it up .. your humble little friend..
.. .. ... - vic ( who else? )
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excellent!!!
Well done! All that feeling..love..emotion..in so few words..simplicity is the key.. -
yeah.. i loved this but am discusded(sp?) by the responces...
humbel(sp? looks weird to me), be it more... throw thanks around and what goes around... well...
Doug
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Thank you suzeecue...I'm honored that you enjoyed this
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What a very romantic Senryu. So few words used to describe such an incredible feeling. This is great
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awe this is beautiful. so much said in so few words.....this is great wonderful write. ♥
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I've been gone for quite sometime, and it's good to see my favorite poets are still my favorites! This one made my heart melt right onto my laptop...now who's gonnna clean this up?....lol VERY NICE!!!! Karen
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A perfect example of less is more - this touched me and i gotta tell you it felt good Brilliant!
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Thanks, Bee
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Nice little ditty!
What comfort those few words seem, Lovely stuff -
vini...what a wonderful compliment. Thank you...for the encouragement and for touching my heart
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WOW , This was just amazing, so few words and wonderful fulfiling impact, hit me hard, this was brilliant to say the least, you did an amazing job here,hmm.....You have a wonderful heart and beautiful mind
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A beautiful haiku, I love the simplicity of it's form and how it can be used for something like this where in so few words a potent image can be painted.
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A very well written piece of soft beauty.
Loved this
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Bless you, Butterfly...you flittered into my world and made me smile
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Thank you, princess...I'm humbled that something I wrote touched you.
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i love this. It is so beautiful. I loved it so much that I bookmarked it.
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Simply beautiful! That middle line was amazing. Very nicely done and gently soothed a ripple in my heart!
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terribly sweet...makes me just want to go ah.... as my heart skips a beat...
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Wow, Love haiku..This was awesome Josh..eyes are the windows to the soul of the other person..great job with this..write more..
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pretty... i hate it how everyone is obsessed with everyone's eyes... but lol, even i love them so whatever. good imagry. God bless. <3 joy.
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Simply lovely!
Kisses,
Mari
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I love when people are happy, they write the most beautiful works.. This was perfect my friend.. Take Care and Be Safe Catressa
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hey
how romantic
guess this is first piece of yours which is soo decent
hmm about yeah mee to get compliments on them
this was nice josh
keep going
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I had to come back to this. I am just in aww at the beauty in so few words.
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wonderful
short but to the point on this haiku I can never write like this it's so awsome
I'm really impress of the people in this site everyone seem to be really talented and you are one of them
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it is lovely ... so very tender ... >>> EM
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wow...how lovely is this...excellent, touching...I don't know what else to say that would do justice to this exquisite haiku...
suzy
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Wow Joshua this is beautiful. almost inspiring
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