hold on
lemme finish up this glass of liquor
because i come drunk and still my fuckin raps is sicker
but that's not sayin much
yours go into the ground
your rhymes are like your cock
they're nowhere to be found
your shit's worse then preschool
more like infant gurgle
i spit my shit like lightning
you're slower then a turtle
not to be cocky, but
i remind myself of Rocky
cause you can't fuckin stop me
or you'll lose ur teeth like hockey
and when i come through
everybody quiets down
i'll shoot your mouth
you couldn't spit, lets see you try it now
and another thing
don't fuck with the king
nobody on my level
on the mic or in the ring
i'll hit you with a combo
or pull an automatic
while u doin the mambo
you just a fuckin faggot
clock don't hit 13
you need to keep wishin
you good? - that's like ur number
its just superstition
by the way, you can't kill me
i'm straight out of philly
and thinkin you got shit on me is really fuckin silly
don't fuck with the champ...
peace
Author notes
haha...gotta love it
Written June 3rd, 2005
A contest entry
- Rappers Freestylers Etc. by ScottWest.
300 points, ended June 23, 2005, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
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TIGHT A$$ POEM
Damn...hands down,crunk even...You got it...what can be said? You got that...i am impressed...very...I'm gonna check out the rest of your work on that note and I usually don't do that...U got skillz...4 sho'..... -
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Decent
lith, its alrite, but i swear you've done betta dan dat, cuz i aint saying this was crap or was brilliant, but it was decent. still keeep it goin blud, safe and peace out
Nunchaks (Brixton, london ,uk)
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yea...i agree...i wouldn't vote for myself on this one even if i could
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lmfao That was ok man, I seen beter from you though.
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It's alright... That turtle line threw me off. But you got him good.
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Nice Lith Check Mine
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My nigga lith, Ah-haah! I see lil nigga. Good shit.
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