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How it should have been

She just wanted it all to end
there was too much pain in her life
wounds that not even he could mend,
covered her heart and soul.
She knew she'd see him someday
but someday was too long to wait.
the pain wouldn't go away
How it should've been.....


She sent him a letter to explain
That she truly did love him
but she just couldn't handle the pain
she wanted him to know she was sorry
and that none of this was his fault
she just couldn't handle being so lonely

she went back to her bedroom
where she took a bottle of lithium
she washed it down with 2 vikadin.
Her eyes closed one last time thinking of him.

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Written June 3rd, 2005

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  • Piece 2 My Puzzle
    June 5, 2005
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    phewy.. nice ending.. way to leave it.. just woo.. great job.-chrissy

  • SubjectxXxSuicide
    June 3, 2005
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    i like it, it falls into the catigories of my poems.
    keep on writting