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Teardrop Kisses (An Acrostic)

Tears of love cascade down my face
Each one lands a kiss upon my pillowcase
Attached to each drop is a memory of you
Rivers of salty tears rushing over me
Drowning my heart and soul as they flow
Remembering soft moments, desire between two hearts
Osculating memories between sorrow and true love
Placed gently on my face each evening

Kisses once filled with love now like poison upon my skin
Intensely burning like acid through to my heart and soul
Something that once was so perfect and magical
Still lingers on inside the depths of me
Expectations and hopes that someday you'll return to me
Splashing kisses of love on my face instead of these teardrop kisses.

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Written June 3rd, 2005

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  • Shakari
    August 17, 2005
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    Now an acrostic is a term that I am familiar with! I think that this was wonderful and sad! You did a great job, especially making it two-sided...happy and sad! What a combination! You would think that they would cancel each other out! LOL! Keep up the good work!


  • faderman1959
    August 12, 2005
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    Acristics are great and I think you did a great job with this one! I really liked the two different sides to this poem! It made a great poem even better! It also surprised me which I liked. Great write!


  • Frozentearz
    July 19, 2005
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    This was such an awesome write congratulations on your award
    well deserved..
    Tears

  • Warrior7
    June 16, 2005
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    I loved this piece because you managed to make it happy and sad at the same time when speaking the words of love. Also i'm easily lured with acrostics i love them. Great write


  • Niki1227
    June 5, 2005
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    Great jOb Hun I loved it as I do all of you writes Niki


  • xcollapseofmyheartx
    June 4, 2005
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    This is wonderful but I kind of liked how it rhymed in the very beginning..try to keep that goin thru the whole thing but other that that the concept is wonderful and i know acrostics are hard

  • JeromesBaby
    June 4, 2005
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    this is very good poetry. i like it. keep up the good work


  • B Chandler
    June 3, 2005
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    first and formost ty for changing the background but anyways this is a very good write good luck in the contest

  • GameGodess
    June 3, 2005
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    WONDERFUL!!!!!!!
    *GameGodess*


  • MorbidDisturbances
    June 3, 2005
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    I LOVE THIS! very good! keep writing! this is really an amazing acrostic and it really makes you think... good job

  • B Chandler
    June 3, 2005
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    plz changethe background or font text color

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