Classical Verse
senyru-acrostic
Lilting words flowing
Inside/out a loving heart
Zealous for us all
/copyright 2005 Bonita M Quesinberry, R.C.\
Read Liz' poetry at allpoetry.com/ClassicalVerse
Author notes
Contest Requirement: "love never really hurts, its the aftermath" and I add, "Love is everyshade of the rainbow, yet no color at all." Also, I have read all entries to date and two of the contest host's poems.
Dearest Liz, you've always supported my hard writing for our Lord; thus, I know He is with you in this hour of recovery. Know that you are much loved and in all our prayers! ~ B¢¾nnieQ 
Written June 3rd, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Love of Poets by externalalias.
400 points, ended December 23, 2005, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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i do not know liz but i will pray for her. we all need prayer!
thanks for your comments on power of love. i am so sorry for the tragedy that has taken place in your life, but it a great testament to your faith that you are able to find the blessings in life as well. God does take good care of us!
God bless, and thanks again. -
loving haiku, another lovely poem!!
Alias xxx -
In just a few wprds you have worked a beautiful poem filled with the spirit of love. This is very generous of you dearest Bonnie. It is a wonder what can be said in so few words. I love that you have combined two forms and still only needed to use a dozen beautiful words. I am glad Lis is healed and back here amoung us. Praise to God for answered prayers. Godspeed in the challenge my siter.
Love,
Renee *hearts;
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Oh Bonnie, This is touching and so beautiful. I am just at a loss for words for all of these touching and hearfelt poems.
Good luck in the contest my friend,
LIZ -
WOW.. Auntie Bonnie... This is an awesome poem!!! It is sooo cool how you combined the two forms!!! Good luck in the contest!!! The poem is really sweet too!!!
Hugs,
Beth -
Not only do you write her a lovely senyru~but you make it into an acrostic~you are amazing. I know she is going to be so impressed with this, I sure was! ♥ vj
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Lilting, I like that. Very strong senyru..It's great when a little holds a lot of punch...excellent.
Sam
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Bonnie, dearest, you have taken so few words and summed up the loving heart of Liz. A lovely and beautiful woman, she is in all our prayers. Hugs, Sis
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Aunty.. this piece is excellent... she would love this.. as much as I do.. Thanks for entering my contest.. and am soo damn thankful to u.. for this lovely prayer.. The background u have chosen would bring strength to her and ur words, a smile
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you said so much with so little..a fitting tribute..I'm not sure if I know her..but anyone would be pleased with such words...Peace Muddy
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This is such a wonderful reminder to keep Liz in our prayers. God bless you all! - joanne
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I really like this piece. My prayers are also with Liz at this time. We are praying for her recovery.
I found this to be very nice poetically for it to come from someone who says they are no poet
. Beautiful
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Well done combining two poetry forms into one. Please feel free to read any/all poetry posted on this site by k-dense (myself)-Curtis Meyer
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nice write
This is a great tribute to Liz. I love her very much also. She is just the sweetest woman on this earth.
xoxo
~laura
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