Sensual beauty
loves splendor in a soft kiss
two souls left breathless~
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Written November 26th, 2002
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ah, now that is a kiss!!
great write -
Such a lovely senryu and delightful pic to go along with it. Well done, keep penning!
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Brilliant
I Think the pic is awesome. Just those words to explain love such a brilliant write. Thank you for comment on my poem. Baby Poet -
The picture's awful. Nice lines. Though I'm not a romantic person
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don't touch it!
Awww complete bliss those two are in......... brings memories. Loved the picture and the few beautiful words at the bottom.
Jezzika -
don't touch it!
Oh sweet one, love the picture, how she seems to be grabbing his head to her, mmmmmmmmmMMMmmmmmmmmmmm, nice...;)
Hugs, ~~ Ce -
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well done -
don't touch it!
Lovely -
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Kisses are the greatest, the most romantic and connecting act beyond sex that is. -
excellent
So beautifully romantic. It makes me wish for a love of my own. The picture reminds me of Romeo and Juliet. Beautiful. -
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Wow... I could go for a kiss like that... sigh... -
don't touch it!
and i am left breathless too...sighs...
that was just perfect sis
love and hugs
dawn -
don't touch it!
BEAUTIFUL...the essence of love and the perfect haiku...I am REALLY impressed with this...It left me breathless....honestly...I really can't find anymore words...I'm putting this in my favorites...Love, Rowan -
don't touch it!
very precious
both pic and poem
nicely penned!
~*~adriana~*~ -
don't touch it!
Perfect!! Susan you have a great talant for this form! I love it!:):):):):):):):):)Visit me soon!~Laura -
excellent
Beautiful Susan :O) lovely read........great piece:) Hugs and love,Sherry
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