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What am i...

What am I supposed to do
if you don't love me
the way i love you

What am i supposed to say
when i see you in my life
each and every day

What am i supposed to think
to the fact that you don't notice me
and know that my heart just sinks

What am i supposed to feel
your hand on my heart
that i wish was so real

I wish you took the time to notice
that i love you
in a way that i can't focus

To hear the words that i speak
and the sounds to the phrases
i can't complete

Author notes

Um i guess i like this poem! It sucks like the rest of them but w/e! This is about a boy that i like.... and to my friends that know yes maybe it's about G.O...... LOL Bye
Written June 2nd, 2005

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  • LeilaJayne
    June 19, 2005
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    THIS DOESNT SUCK! i hate it when people say there poems suck but are 100 tyms better then mine! because that makes me feel like poop! This is an awesome poem!
    <<I love this faces!


  • ForgottenxMe
    June 13, 2005
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    this does not suck its great. i mean a lot of people know how you feel and this is a great poem and it shows great emotion.its GREAT OVERALL


  • Forevers Eve9
    June 2, 2005
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    very good

    WOW kiara I like this poem!!! it`s really good, Keep it up and don`t forget to read my new poem.It`s about jerome.