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Sunset

The sun is setting
And I'm all alone
The sky is so beautiful
But it would be so much better
If you were here with me

I'm laying on this blanket
Which I've spread across the grass
I try to concentrate on the colors
The blues and purples and pinks (no black)
But it fills me with such sweet sorrow

My breath catches in my chest
As a slight breeze brushes against my face
I remember how we used to come here together
And I remember our first time
You'd call me your "Sweet Angel"

Now you're my Angel
And I'll never forget you
You're living with the stars
And every time one twinkles
I know you're up in Heaven, looking down on me

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Written June 1st, 2005

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