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Spolia Opima (Latin for: The Richest Booty)

Swirling in darkness
Exists a light to blind the masses.
Beautiful Disgrace,
Thinks she, my beauty, hiding her beautiful face.

Zenith of glass Heavens,
A zephyr of the avalonian winds...
She born, of annus mirabilis, a carnal sin,
The beauty of the thousand sevens.

Chef-d'oeuvre of the world,
Beau ideal..la chiquita,
To kalon Ashley, radiant girl.

Author notes

...Hmmmm has some latin an some greek mixed in there like that in a cauldron.
Written June 2nd, 2005

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  • FullyAlive
    July 20, 2005
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    ill have to agree with ImNoGodess... although you have been a favorite of mine for a while... it was a quick desision(like i said... i cant spell today...)
    anyway... this is beautiful...and it seems as though, you sir... are multilingual... im jelous...

    grrness......
    lol... love you...

    bexa


  • ImNoGoddess
    June 22, 2005
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    Shocking talent shown here. You're a quick favorite of mine. -Raviyn


  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    June 2, 2005
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    this was another amazing piece Anathema,
    this was a mind blowing poem... your words were creativly weaved.....
    Amazing
    Angel


  • Corpse-Groom
    June 2, 2005
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    zephyr - any soft gentle breeze (french of greek origins)
    annus mirabilis - the year of wonders... (Latin)
    Chef-d'oeuvre - Masterpiece. (French)
    Beau ideal - Perfect model of beauty. (French)

    Hope that helps a bit..
    La chiquita - the little girl (spanish)
    To kalon - The beautiful (greek)

  • IHeartFatBoyz
    June 2, 2005
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    I couldnt understand it.... Maybe you could meet me in PRIVATE and you can tell me about it I'm so happy your writing again! I see my name in it though lol. I luv ya hun

    Ashley

  • SamBam76
    June 2, 2005
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    AHH YOUR BACK!! :-D i love you!! okay but to this poem OMG its awesome your such a sweety even thouhg i couldnt understand it all...your an amazing poet! great job!! *i have missed you!*

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