it wasn't to long ago that i saw the face
the face of a fiend
that fiend that i should have listened to but i was to selfish
to know that i wasn't just hurting myself but the others around me
Until one day my secret let out
i was so scared i dint know what to do do
so i did it over and over until i passed out
to awake in a room not my own in a bed not my own
restrained in a hospital
for Weeks couldn't i wouldn't talk
for days i wouldn't i couldn't eat
until one day i saw the face
the face of the friend that told me to stop
the face of GOD
this time i listened and I'm out now
i didnt cut but talk to God
God told me now I'm telling you
Dint cut cut cut
talk talk talk
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i worte this for a firne
Written June 1st, 2005
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Good write
I really liked this poem. It talks about a realistic situation for a lot of people. I myself can remember years ago, when I passed at a party or two. I'm glad those days are long gone. Thanks for your comment on my poem, "Before You Decide," too. Peace. -
A very well expressed poem about a very sensitive subject! The flow was wonderful
Faith can move mountains! An excellent job with this piece, I hope you continue to write and share your talent with us here. As a site greeter here at Ap, I would just like to take this opportunity to welcome you to our site
Nice to read you ♥FifthD♥ve♥
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I really liked this poem, even though it was a heart wrenching picture that the poem painted. It showed what a little bit of faith can do in someones life and I can relate to that.
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