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Bruised

I’m black and blue
And so bruised
All because of you
All you do is put me down
You’re making me hopeless and helpless
As you push me into nothingness
Making me so numb
And want to die

I’m bruised inside
Crimson tears fall from my eyes
I’m living in a world of lies
Feeling like I’m going to die

You bruised me
You used me
You put me down
Made me frown
I’m so bruised
That I will never be healed…

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Written June 1st, 2005

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  • princessarya
    May 18, 2007
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    owen, my love, you're not writing any poems like this, are you? this is scary.


  • Angelflower
    June 6, 2005
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    This was a great write hun.. Can relate to it oo. Talk to you later..


  • Touchof1der silver member
    June 4, 2005
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    Such a dark, angsty poem from such a loving, caring heart! You need momma to go bitch slap someone for you?! You are worth far more than gold young man and you are very loved!! I know. Just ask daddy! Just ask me!!
    ♥ Kimberly