Face up upon your bed is where I lie,
From outside your window it appears I'm still alive.
Eyes frozen at a position of which I would never look away,
A note taped on the ceiling, something at this point I was much to weak to say.
"You lost yourself years ago before today. You've broken promises and you've pushed loved ones away. Every tear, every scar. You'll forget all of this, just remember you made it this far. No one will hurt you anymore. No one will be able to see. For years you've been held back from everything, Now you'll be able to live free."
I was always the forgiving type, but I wouldn't have been able to forgive myself,
My skin began to turn blue, as I started to question my mental health.
I peeled the flesh back from my bones to show you I'm not as empty as I seem,
Lately It's becoming harder to tell what's real and what's a dream.
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Written June 1st, 2005
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Awesome poem..sad though..but that's not bad...Keep up the good work.
your a great writter.
xoxo
christa -
this was great...but i got a little lost at times and had to go back and try to figure that out...it was good at some times because you werent given things away...but there were some parts that were a easy to misinterperate...anyways i liked it and i can relate to it...kudos!
~Laura~ -
i like it.. but i am having trouble with the lasyt line..
"Because I can't stop living this in my head." i understand what you are trying to say.. but this line is just wierd..
great peom though. i like the meaning behind it.
cat~
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