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salmon pink

when I sit and I think,
of the colour salmon pink,
I see fish in the drink,
as they swim up, and then sink.


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strange but true!
Written June 1st, 2005

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  • Irilis4u
    October 13, 2005
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    lol this was cute, very funny, nice and descriptive of salmon.
    Yum.
    Irilis
  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    June 2, 2005
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    LOL, very cute.