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I Hate You

I hate you and I
Want you to die so bad that
I'll kill you myself

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Written June 1st, 2005

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  • princessarya
    May 1, 2007
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    wow, owen, so angry. i hope i never make you mad, sweetheart. *higs and kisses*


  • galfalfa gold member
    January 14, 2007

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    LOL

    It would appear someone has had a bad day I giggle now because i know you're feeling better Owen and i also know you wouldnt hurt a fly..its good to vent through poetry though - saves alot of murders from happening Maybe now i wouldnt want to bump into my fellow Canadian yahoo buddy at my local Tim Hortons

    Well done in getting your point across, Hey next time you feel like doing someone in..just say, I want to kill you a million times in a Peter Lory sounding voice Oh no, strike that, it would be plagiarism....

    galf


  • Touchof1der silver member
    June 4, 2005
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    Holy Schneikies!! I did not hear those words come from your mouth young man! Just wait until your father gets home! Wow Owen! What a powerful statement.
    ♥ Kimberly

  • Alexis-skye95
    June 3, 2005
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    ok very very u