Mermaids
Mesmerizers
Methodically make
Macho merchant marines madly
murmur.
Author notes
Alliterative Cinquain.Also a tongue twister.
Written June 1st, 2005
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A contest entry
- Cinquains ~ Series 4 by antique.
300 points, ended June 5, 2005, 11 entries
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Very creative..and I must say that you have a great talent for using alliterations. Nicely done...thanks for your entry.
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What a unique and amazing idea to start each word with the 'm'. quite difficult I guess to come up with something like this, very well done!
I wish you the best of luck with everything you do!
Leander -
wow .. that is a tongue twister .. you've captured the essence of the mermaid beautifully .. very nicely done ....... thankyou so much for entering and i wish you the best of luck in the contest .... keep the ink flowing hun
~Aimee
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oh I hate alliteration. You did use one of my favorite words though , "murmur," and I like mermaids
good luck in the contest.
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Ah, this is brilliant. You are so good with the alliterative touch...very nicely done. Beautiful work.
Sam
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Awesome!
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