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The Bitch Rules!

I'd like to see you black and blue
A beating might make this come true
Why these colors wished on you?
Because you made this stupid rule!

A last line image you request?
I do not understand this silly test
So just to get it off my chest
"A middle finger, at address"



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Author notes

This was written for the contest by The Fire Inside. Okay- This is all in FUN! I took a chance here and I hope you are not offended but after reading your contest rules I thought you would find this funny. It was certainly meant to be. If not, then I apologize.
Written June 1st, 2005

A contest entry

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 2, 2005
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    I freakin' love this piece! LOL I read it over a few times actually, thought I had commented. Anyway, this is very creative and you can tell it's done in fun, especially after reading the rules. I didn't have a problem with them myself and it looks like you didn't either LOL Great flow and creativity here. Congrats on the silver Blessings, Gypsy


  • coeurporcelaine
    June 1, 2005
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    yeah that's what i wanted. you to describe an image using words. -sigh- i hate then English language sometimes. too many ambiguos meanings...sorry if i was un-clear.

  • five40
    June 1, 2005
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    Cool. I thought you would like it. I didn't understand the "Image as the last line". I went with what I thought you meant, describing an image. If you want something different, let me know and I'll change it. Peace.

  • coeurporcelaine
    June 1, 2005
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    nice. haha. i take no offense, by the way. i like this one...hahahahahah... glad ur not uptight and cocky like the others...hahahah...like the picture!