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Did You See It?

Did you see it?
It was right there next to you.
No? Shinning bright blue, with it's blonde hair.
There's another!
This one is red with orange hair!
Don't call me crazy. I saw what i saw.
A lightning bug? No no no, it was very much a faerie.
What? Why are your eyes big?
Do you see it?
From the corner of mine eye i can see it's flashing beauty.
Why does it stray out of eyesight of the person?
It went away? Are you sure? It's right there beside YOU!
What a wonderful night this is, in this forest with the faes.

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Written June 1st, 2005

A contest entry

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