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*^*Let Your Spirit Fly*^*

Let Your Spirit Fly

Taking that step forward begs strength
The next step relys on courage
Your friends are a Blessing--Give Thanks!
Become the one that smiles and flourish
Your spirit needs fed and nourished

Peer into pools; reflect and share
Pebbles are stones dappled; some scarred
Gazing; moonlit ripples your cares
Embrace memories in your heart
Tears become wishes upon stars

Within each moment one's life holds
Tightly wrapped around bonds bound now
Emotions disarrayed are shown
Ties of life's knots of love now found
Each  lesson discovers a crown

Reasons lay out each consequence
Blanks fill the experience's knowledge
Left with situation's common sense
Pictures fill the past; heart's collage
Scenes packed on the mind's cluttered stage

Silver lined moon breaks towards dawn
Breezes carry scents; morning dew
Enjoy the warmth before it's gone
Ignore hurtful words; hearsay's hue
Senseless to decide real truth

Strength identifys your beliefs
Angelic shadows; around you
Never that far; there when in need
Beautiful spirit; growing wings
Let your wings soar upon life's truth

Madame Mystery 2005

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Written May 31st, 2005

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 31, 2005
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    Well Done!

    I had to pay attention to each line to learn the meaning within and behind, you pen so well, and creative my friend, as the words from your sweet soul often mend...

    Keep up the great writes, I enjoyed this, great imagery, form and flow... Nice to read you again, read ya laters too!

    Love ya!

    -Timothy