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Reflection (Cinquain)



Alone,
With only you,
I am aware of love
And all the beauty it entails.
Forever.




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Written May 30th, 2005

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  • masterblaster gold member
    June 6, 2005
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    Hi, This is super it says it all, hugs Di


  • Elrenia
    May 31, 2005
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    Thank you. I have been looking for a contest for these ever since I discovered them like last week. LOL.


  • B Chandler
    May 31, 2005
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    this is such a lovely poem you have written good luck in my contest


  • Elrenia
    May 31, 2005
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    Thank you. I am glad you like it. Your comments mean much.


  • quietly burning
    May 31, 2005
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    i like the way the last word in this falls and tails away, just like it goes on .... "forever"

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