I am sorry daddy for the other day,
I want to take everything I said away,
it wasn't right for me to get mad at you,
but as that day went on, my anger just grew.
I am sorry daddy for yelling so loud,
I feel so stupid and I know you aren't proud,
for I know I wouldn't be proud of a brat,
which that was how I acted and that is that!
I am sorry daddy for not being good,
and being the good little girl that I should,
I know everything I did that day was wrong,
please forgive me so our family can stay strong.
I am sorry daddy and I love you!
Author notes
I got mad at my dad the other day and this is to him.
Written May 31st, 2005
A contest entry
- FOR THE KIDS 6 TO 16: FORGIVENESS! by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended June 2, 2005, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great Apology
What a fabulous way to pen your feelings of the moment and ask forgiveness. This is a wonderful poem and I enjoyed reading it. I think your dad must have loved it tooo!!!
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Well written!
I guess your Great GrandJackie has to say you are so special and your mom and daddy love you so. Takes a bigggg girl to say I am sorry. Your poem was great and I know he loved it.
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well done, lovely, great luck in the contest ( I entered to)
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I showed your poem to your Dad and I could tell he is very proud and loves you very much! So do I!!! We have been blessed with a wonderful smart daughter,we all make mistakes now and then,they help us grow and learn.I love you my little lady,
Mom
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I am sure your daddy is proud. This will bring tears to his eyes and a smile to his face Good luck in the contest
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Well done and well said, Sadie! Without going into any detail, you have communicated the consequences of your outburst and your feelings about it, and made a very good apology.
Your rhyming and syllable counts are good. Good luck in the contest. -
THANKS!
Good write, Sadie.
Thanks for entering.
Good luck!
Brian
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