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box of fears (unfinished)

why can't I move,
Why can't I talk.
Searching my brain for ideas.
Scanning a black heavy box of fears
Screaming and closing my eyes to the tears.

It's taken me this long to realise
 how much you've fucked me up.
Listen as I sit silent in  contemplation.
Quietly turning the hands back
and replaying all the shit that I failed to see.

Why can't I move
Why can't I talk.
searching my brain for idea.
Scanning a black heavy box of fears.
screaming and closing my eyes to the tears.

Author notes

i had written more but when i came to post it, i decided to change it so, when thats done i will finish posting.
Written May 31st, 2005

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