Remember, when you see the skies start to fall, and the moon bleeds; When the sun melts and the seas boil; When everything seems to be falling apart around you, remember: Just look for me. Look for that light in the darkness. Take my hand and I'll guide you out. Then you'll see, as your world puts itself back together. Our world. Just take my hand...
(c) Daniel T. Mead
Random Haiku/Senryu:
Beatnik soul rhythm
Busting out haikus all day
Geez, they're annoying
Author notes
Just something I wrote a while back, figured I'd show it. Since everyone makes Haikus everywhere, I figured this shouldn't be bad. Plus I put a haiku at the end as a little random treat. -Dan
Written May 31st, 2005
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A very sweet and inviting write..I do like your style, very random..I've never seen it before. The haiku was adorable, a silly addition to the light poem. Great read!
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I like this a whole lot. As usual you have a lot of interesting imagery, and I like the message of this. Putting a haiku at the end was cool and I respect people who can write them because for some reason that's one of the few forms of poetry I have a lot of trouble with. Maybe because they're short and I have trouble condensing my writing to a few lines. I would applaud this but I'm out of those so I will do so tommorow. Great write Danny! *hugs* Talk to you later.
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lol this is interesting hehe! i love the above write. its intesting, makes you kinda wonder about everything.
makes me smile great job dann!!!
<3 you know !
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I see what you mean. I love your rendition of a hiaku. Makes me giggle. And your short piece. Wow! I do believe I shall have that one tatooed on my hand. lol Not really but it's tempting, and considering my aversion for needles that's pretty darn good!
your fellow poet,
youllneverknow
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