I heard you whisper softly to your friend
“She’s the one.”
To hear you say those words thrilled me!
I want to be the one to make you happy.
without you in my life it's unthinkable,
I know I can trust my heart with you
There is a gentleness within your soul.
We’ll spend the rest of our life together
dream our dreams of a wonderful future,
side by side we will embrace this love.
Nurture it with a fervour beyond all others
wrapped in your embrace is pure magic.
To be loved by you is a dream come true
one I believed would never happen,
what a miracle that we found each other
fate brought us together the night we met,
when you looked into my eyes, then I knew.
I whispered to my friends as our eyes locked.
“He’s the one.”
Author notes
Written May 31st, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- You Know You Want To Write About Love (Contest) by Shantell.
400 points, ended June 6, 2005, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Love so lovely lovingly loved by the loved and his beloved...Lovely!--Shubs
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excellent
ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL!!!
I was amazingly touched by this poem. I talks of everything I ever wanted in life but never had. In a relationship that is. What a fantastic way to feel. I love the way he said she's the one
then you end it by saying he's the one. That sent shivers through me. Wonderful.
Hugs
Jan -
Such a romantic poem.. written with the beauty of your soul... how could anyone not fall in love with your beautiful poetry... Your poetic heart always pours out masterpiece after masterpiece.. Congratulations on winning Gold..
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I didn't notice that it was an entry for a contest when I read it the first time. I felt like it is a very good poem, though, and sure enough it is if it won the gold. Congratulations!!!
Deke -
Thank you Deke for your comment, I won the Gold trophy with this one.
Please do stop by and visit.
Jennifer. -
I thoroughly enjoyed this piece; it is great. I think that you must be a great poetess, and I will be back again to read more.
Deke
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Aww Jen, how did I miss this one..this was very dreamy..romantic write..i really enjoy your love poems..you always do great job with your love poems..keep penning sweet one
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Thank you Herman for your lovely comment, and thank you for visiting, I really appreciate it. Hope all is well with you my friend.
Jenn 
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How very beautiful is this fantastic write Feelings I knwo so very well. Dreams that become true. Slowly the clouds reveal the sun that was hidden for so long. How precious a new love can be special in spring when nature slowly comes alive. This was absolute fantastic written excellent done
Hugs Herman
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Ofcourse it's about you, silly man, you are my inspiration. I know I can't get rid of you.....AND I DON'T WANT TO...SO THERE!!
so you are STUCK with me
Love and
's Jenn
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I enjoyed this poem, it is very sweet. Just so you know, it is suitable for this contest. As long as your writing about love . Thank-you for entering my contest!
-Shantell -
Nah, not drunk Vic, it's just a poem I wrote, that's all
Jenn -
uh oh... i know i a silly.. now see.. what did i forget, the most important thing in the world has been forgotten by me.. ( as usuall)
but then.. hehe, muahaha, u think u will get outta my grip soo easily.. naaa...
..dingo bingo
- vic -
3 stars ***
Well, did you make sure that guy wasnt drunk when he said "She's the one" ??
i dont think you did, bad girl, realy bad,and that silly inncocent poor guy.
And if you think you wont rhyme poems and thus you wil make me not read your poem, then that is the silliest thing you ever gonna think, i loved this write even though it had no rhymes structurally, but i rhymed well with my heart coz a friend who stays in my heart wrote it..
good write,
thanks for sharing...
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.... just keep it up...... your humble little friend......
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..... ..... - vic ( who else?)
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