when i think of what i am
i just want to cry
when i think of how i got this way..
i think i'd rather die
the scars along my wrist
unseen by those who'd care
if they all saw my pain
my strength would be stripped bare.
lock my heart up from the world and throw away the key...
give the world the girl they want.. ill hide away whats me
ill lock the door into my room, release the pain inside
and then my friends they all will say..............
i wonder how she died?
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Written May 31st, 2005
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sad and good
this is very sad but really nicely written.i hope this isn't the way you really feel and i hope it helps to get your feelings out like this.i give you my applause,chin up..
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That's a great poem. I hope you didn't mean a word of it but it was a really good poem. If you are having these types of feelings, you are doing the right thing by writing them and getting them out. I applaud your poem.
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i think ur poems are so good. im glad u have found a way to express ur feelings through poems. keep it up. its kym by the way
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great
Very good and depressing. Love it. good writing
AK
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