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Happy and in Love

I am in love
It's a wonderful thing
I am in love
It makes me want to sing

His name is Tyler
and that's all you need to know
He is mine
And I know it shows

I am in love
I just can't help it
I am in love
and it raised me from the pit

The pit of doomed dreams
To the bowl of happiness
I am in love
And it's a wonderful mess

A mess that is right
A mess that I cannot fight
I am in love
For I am happy tonight

Author notes

this is exactly how I feel right at this moment. i just hope and wish and pray that this lasts! I think it will! well
I g2g
Love Always
Megan
Written May 30th, 2005

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  • XLucidxDreamsX
    July 29, 2005
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    The pit of doomed dreams
    To the bowl of happiness
    I am in love
    And it's a wonderful mess
    this is my favorite part of your poem.. it is just so sweet!!!
    wonderful job
    *SB*

  • Haruspex
    May 31, 2005
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    Excellent

    nice poem! it kinda makes my face hurt from too big of a smile, but its all good. im happy i make you feel this way, and just to let you know, i feel that way everyday i get to see you (or even think of you)I couldnt have written the poem any better. Love Always,
    Tyler


  • Jenn-Swenson
    May 31, 2005
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    awesome

    hey its about time you write a poem lol but yeah i reallyl oved this i know this feeling its great to be in love and to be loved. you did a great job on this i know your b/f will love it great job keep it up!!!
    -Jenn