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Mind Tripping

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Think about all the power you can have
Tripping through someone else's mind
back and forth, right to left
This road has made my mind foggy
Silk and timothy Leary have come for me
Christ has been re-routed through another thief
If it will fit your wallet, it fits my belief

'you've got to run to the light'

Through a skipping girl's sunrise I find
a whisper, and the years to unwind
Drive me, drive me if you can
Turn the dial to another band
this train's blowing, blowing, blowing
with the sand, to another land

Think about all the power you could have
Talking in someone else's mind

Midnight never comes when you're stock
Stuck between the boxes
Taken down before the dawn before the
dusk, when you're looking for the double yellow
and your search light is shooting broken arrows

'think about all the power you could have
think about all the people you could save, feed'

But this road has made my mind foggy
Sick, and timothy Leary has come for me
candle stick Christ has been re-routed
through another thief, through my hand,
palm, lacks, no grip...

'think about all the power you can have
tripping through another's mind'

Author notes

A song off of my fourth album shen-ring

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www.gangbox.com
Written May 30th, 2005

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  • DancingShadowCorpse
    July 18, 2006
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    Incredible

    Fantastic lyrics! I love the flow and the way it twists your thoughts when reading it. Spectacular work!

  • dsfhsdjfgsdfgsfh
    July 1, 2005
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    by the way, check your email

  • dsfhsdjfgsdfgsfh
    July 1, 2005
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    I like it man. Bastard, I'm going through "the great drug dought of '05."
    It's like trying to find a mushroom in a pile of horse shit.


  • Man of Harlech silver member
    July 1, 2005
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    The right stuff

    This is my kind of poem. You have attempted to address the chaos and have given it intelligent life. You can sit at my table and make sense.

    Man of Harleck
    Edited on Jul 01, 4:45 p.m. because ''.

  • blueeyestexas
    July 1, 2005
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    your lyrics are always a trip! Love it...Peace, Kelly

  • crying inside out
    July 1, 2005
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    yeah i like it good job. trippin through someone elses mind is creative. that is something i look for and you have held my attention and interest with this poem. keep up the good work.


  • Blazing White Wolf
    May 31, 2005
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    yes another wonderful write with so much power and substance behind the clever word used i enjoyed it
    love and light
    blaze

  • Miji
    May 31, 2005
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    Interesting poem. And I liked these lines especially,

    "Christ has been re-routed through another thief
    If it will fit your wallet, it fits my belief"

    That sounds like most religions in itself. o.o But intriguing. Good job.

    Keep writing, Miji


  • Umi Juvariel
    May 30, 2005
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    Absolutely riveting

    Yet another awesome set of lyrics! I loved the flow, the rythm...I could hear it in my head. Absolutely astonishing. Good work! I especially loved the lines
    'Through a skipping girl's sunrise I find
    a whisper, and the years to unwind
    Drive me, drive me if you can
    Turn the dial to another band
    this train's blowing, blowing, blowing
    with the sand, to another land'

    It reminds me of a line from 'Thorn apple' from the CD Emotionally Unavailable. Just an awesome write, keep'em coming!

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