They stare at me,
Piercing into my skin.
An unseen depth,
In the appearance of black,
Surrounded by green.
Shining,
Emotion pouring through,
As they look to the sky,
Reflecting the gorgeus blue.
The green sparkles,
A gorgeous glitter
Hiding beneath their depth,
As they turn to face you,
And stare into another set
Of eyes,
Little black holes
Surrounded by brown now.
Full of questions,
These eyes show intrigue,
But are devoid of happiness,
As they stare back into green.
The depth of each pair,
Piercing into the other set.
As they stare into each other,
Seeing but a reflection
Of themselves.
Author notes
this is about eyes, i think it's kinda like what you wanted. also, this is a cool contest, i like all the options.
Written May 30th, 2005
A contest entry
- 10 Choices...Lotsa points...=) by silver bugs.
302 points, ended June 7, 2005, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
-
thanx for all the praise everyone, i really appreciate it.
-
WOW! I love describing poems. And this just fits it totally! WOW!..Well done and keep it up!
Good luck in the contest!X
-
Wow, this is really beautiful. Full of imagery and very descriptive. I like the ending, very powerful. This is really nice and exactly what I think of eyes, I'm glad you chose the eyes choice, it's my favourite. Best of luck
~Lana
Adding your comment:
