God,I'm lost and for some reason,
I cannot find you;
Nor do you seem to take time to look for me,
I ask you God,
Do you understand each scar?
Do you realize the pain that lingers inside of me?
I cover my pain with a smile,
Crying without tears,
Just to hide this trouble,
While alone I shower and cuts spread
Crying while I bathe in my blood,
I wish to die,
My prayer,
A simple plead,
God,
Just let me die,
For you gave me life,
I beg,
End it now likewise,
For that is my plead,
Author notes
I dunno. Blah.
Written May 30th, 2005
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wow!! this is a really good piece of writting, sad and emotional.. but extremly well written. i have felt this way many times before, and i hope that if this is the way you are feeling that you find happiness and learn to appriciate life. anyway, keep up the good work, seems you have a talent. take care!
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Really sad poem.Hope you stop feeling blah soon because it really sucks!Great write.
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....Joshua..this is sad..for sure. I am sorry you feel like this...my friend...I hope it soon passes....please do not let life get you down...I am here if you need me.
Hugs..your AP mum
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Your words always help Lori I dunno these past couple weeks have been blah, and I dont know sometimes I do feel like this but idk its more of a write than anything else k I am fine thanks for the comment
JoshuaCrisel
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Josh... this is so sad.. I hope its fictional and this is not you.. God will not take us until he has prepared a place for each and everyone of us.. The only way we can go before that is to take our own life.. and its not worth it.. Think of others who are worst off then you..
Take care Hugs Lori
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