fly by night,
Lovely
in the absence of light
you were there
alone.
brave,
what i wanted to
become
courageous,
Standing beneath
burning sun
a warm welcome
greets
a silent smile
meets
my eyes, dirty
streets
never once asking
for thanks
how hard it must
have been
alone
you gave all you
could
and we asked for
more
...
and
im simply
sorry
what else can,
i say
i love
you.
Author notes
Written May 29th, 2005
A contest entry
- Happy Cheery Motivational Poems!! by lightswitches.
410 points, ended July 31, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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were you ever in love? I mean true love?! because this is so amazing, seems to be words only spoken by a lover. This is just..wow. awesome job joe.
gypsy -
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I actually wrote this for my mom
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Wow, this was really really good!
I liked everything about this. Everything from the perfect vocabulary, to the pattern. Everything just fell into place.
This is an example of the types of poems that this contest strived to receive!
thank you -
A beautiful composition--Very Well Written!
Well Done & Best of luck in the contest!
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Wow, sounds like someone just may have found someone special!
Awesome, awesome poem. You never cease to amaze me with your descriptive tones. -
very cool man. same style, i like it... a little bit of a different topic. i like to see this from u. keep it real.
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Oh, nice, very, very nice.
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