I'm sorry I'm sorry
I'm 17, easily swayable by
Batting eyelashes,
You're stronger, you've been here though,
Understand, understand
Try to,
I'm sorry.
I won't describe her, it wouldn't help,
She was 16 and invincible,
I had to.
You're thousands and thousands
Of miles away.
You wouldn't come.
You could have
You chose not to.
Now it hurts worse
Than I did before and I feel like
A 14 year old girl whos crying because
I was told Depeche Mode broke up
And you're the 16 year old boy
Who turns away, looks at other girls,
And pretends not to notice.
I'm sorry.
I love you
But I can't promise
I won't do it again.
It hurts
And when I'm with them it hurts less.
You won't answer my calls, reply to my mail,
You're the adult.
Be resposible. I'm just a kid.
Sorry, sad, and seventeen
What do you expect?
I'm sorry.
I love you.
You can come to the states
And make it all better
I promise
I'll make it
Worth it.
I love you.
But I'm a screaming, crying, 2 year old
And if I don't get my way
I'll give it away
To the first girl who looks at me funny.
I LOVE YOU.
But if you don't love me
Enough to follow,
Why should do anything for you?
I'm sorry,
I love you.
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Written May 29th, 2005
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REALLY REALLY good. There's not much else to say except for that was really really great.
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wonderfully written
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i really like the flow to this poem, it's kind of like ramblings that make sense...if you know what i mean? any way great job
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i get the very feeling my freind, more so then you would know. my name is james and i have been picked to be your mentor. i hope you don't mind that. but this is a great peace
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This is a really good poem. the emotions come out so well, and because of your writing style, they appear raw and unpolished from your soul. You have a great flow to this, no constricting formats which I like. Great job on this, and I hope things get better.
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It;s hard when we love someone adn they dont seem to make the effort to show how much they love us back... just be careful sweetheart ok?
Shari
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So lovingly raw and real.
I apologize for my short-comment, however, I am short-winded by your nice words.
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Wow, welcome back, I haven't forgotten about you. Like your other writings this was great. Don't be a stranger, stop by and see us
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Thanks yeah, I haven't written anything in forever, thansk so muc
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I haven't read anything from you in a LOOONG time, lol...this piece is pretty cool - no attention is paid to form or function, which makes the emotional appeal all the better. Hopefully your beloved comes around, eh? Nice work
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