I walk in the house-
after a long day of work,
(well a few hours and a few with the guys)
the apartment is light,
I smell roses in the air-
"Baby?" I call out for my girlfriend
no words are return, just a few giggles from the bedroom.
I walk in the door- to see my girlfriend
on her knees, eating some chick out, I dont interrupt them,
I turn on the TV, catch the end of the playoffs, pop open
a beer-
"Hey babe, when did you get home?" my girlfriend asks..
"aww, a few seconds ago,"
her friend comes up to me, "Hey, my name is Nicole, nice to meet you." I shake her hand- it was really nice to meet her
as well as Samantha last night, and Jessica the night before.
Author notes
my favorite movie is "The Devil In Miss Jones."
Written May 29th, 2005
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great piece! i really enjoyed the story and i was surprised by the ending, pleasantly shocked! the guy seemed to really take it all in stride, that his woman has an insatiable appetite for other women. and her girlfriends are a hobby for her. cool! -
Wow.. this was weird and I liked it.. lol.. I really really liked it.. good write..
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Seductive Sweet
Sounds like a fun whimsical piece. I really like the end where the speaker starts listing girls that he's met... that is truely an awesome relationship; polyamoury or swinging isn't my lifestyle, but kudos to the ones that can do it.
Keep adding works, I'd be happy to read some more!
--luna -
movie?
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tsk tsk lol
hmmm never saw the movie good poem though wierd relationship all in all but I am way to jealouse to let something like that happen with me. I am asuming this is from the movie? great write
take care
ciao
leala
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