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Her Eternal Light

One beautiful soul in my life
that will forever shine her light
no matter where she is in life
her love flourishes in my heart

Her light is the strongest I've seen
and I only wish for that life to rub off on me
so that I may face life and continue on
no matter how much I want to give up or give in

I only hope this beautiful mother of mine
continues to smile for me and with me
no matter where she may end up in life
no matter what happens to either of us

All I need to know is that she's still smiling
and that will give me all I need to go on
so I can be all I'd like to be and follow through
in the strength she holds within herself for life

The demons she must fight, the emotions breaking her
will never win while that light forever shines bright
and I give whatever strength I have to her all I can
so that she knows that my love for her is always there

I am always by her side as she fights the darkness
I hold her hand in spirit when she's afraid to sleep
I'm by her bedside when she's in the hospital
and she is always in my heart and thoughts

Her beautiful light blossoms in my soul
and cleanses me of any darkness I have for that time
Her gifted presence blesses me with love and care
that I have not felt in so many years

Her beautiful writing is enough to leave you speechless
her neverending fights and bursting strength leaves
me in an incredible light of respect and awe-inspiration
and I want nothing more than to be able to be as strong

Even in the stain of her crystal tears, she is always beautiful
no matter what she goes through in life, nothing will change
the wondrous beauty within her heart and soul that I've come to know
nothing will destroy that heavenly light that I am blessed with

In her presence, it is so hard not to smile
She is a gift beyond the stars and
I have the blessing of having her as my AP mother
not to mention a beautiful friend

Author notes

I chose to write about my AP mom, Princess Muse. She's a beautiful woman and so strong...She is someone I have always respected and looked up to ever since we started talking. Her strength and the love of others have always gotten her through and she has been through SO much. You can't help but respect and love Tory after you get to know her. She shines a light like no other and it makes her one of the most beautiful people on earth.

Angel of love, ray of light,
within her arms, dreams take flight.
Sent from heaven just for me,
advice from her, always free.

This little stanza poem is beautiful and suits Tory and so many others so well, Josie. It's lovely.
Written May 29th, 2005

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  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    June 5, 2005
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    Thank you for the lovely comment. And you're welcome. Good luck with judging.

  • peluche
    June 5, 2005
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    What an amazing write. The words flowed from the page effortlessly. It is a beautiful, heartfelt tribute and I am sure it is much appreciated. I want to thank you for taking the time to enter my conest. I really appreciate it!

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    June 3, 2005
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    Thanks so much for your kind words. I'm sure she loves it.

  • I Could Care Less
    June 3, 2005
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    this is beautiful.. u did such an amazing job.. i can't explain on how well you've written this piece.. so beautiful.. i hope she likes it lots... ok not likes more like LOVE IT!! hehe.. good luck in the contest..

    peace,
    Sara

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 30, 2005
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    Thank you, lovely butterfly. I'm glad that you liked it. I only hope that mom will love it as much as I think she will. I got an update on her today and she's doing OK, so I hope to hear from her againmaybe sometime next week or so. Either way, I'm glad to know she's donig well, as everyone who loves her are.

    Your

  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    May 30, 2005
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    This is beautiful. Knowing Tory as I do, even though she isn't my official AP mum she still took me under her wing and I have only the same hopes and dreams for her that you do. This is a gorgeous write darling and I know she will love it
    Your girl
    Sha

  • GauArrowny
    May 29, 2005
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    Hehe, how sweet of you to write yet another poem for her. She deserves it though. I can't argue that. My thoughts and strength are with her as she fights those demons. Excellent poem. Good luck in the contest.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 29, 2005
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    Thanks, dear. I really appreciate that thought. I'm glad to hear she is doing well. Please tell her not to worry about me. I'm doing well.

  • May 29, 2005
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    this is beautiful rose. i talked with tori on the phone this morning. she sounds alot better than she did the other day. i promise you the next time i talk to her i will read this to her for you. she send syou her love.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 29, 2005
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    Thank you for your comment. I'm sure this will put a smile on her face as well.

  • Summer Kiss
    May 29, 2005
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    This is such a sweet poem for you AP mom! I read what she is going through and I know that will put a big smile on her face when she reads this knowing that you care for her as much as u do!!!! Great job with this hun and keep up the good work! Good luck in the contest too!

    ~Summer Kiss~

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 29, 2005
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    Thanks, dear brother. I know she will appreciate this as well and she needs the support. Talk to you later.
    Edited on May 29, 10:17 because ''.
  • Chained Fury
    May 29, 2005
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    I can tell she is a great person from this poem. Seems like a friend like no other. Even through adversity there is the will to carry on. The poem flowed well and I know she will like this piece from you. Best wishes.

    -Chained Fury
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