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Sea Queen

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On the surface of the ocean
Sways a Sea Queen,
She was my Queen.
Rose from the crowd
Smiled down as they bowed.
Rose from the crowd
She rose from the crowd.

She floats away,
She won't stay
And I pray
She comes back one day...

Sea Queen,
Sea Queen,
Can't you see that you're so flitty?
Sea Queen,
You're so mean,
And without fins you can't swim far.

In adagio clouds above us,
There reigns a Sea Queen,
She was my Queen.
Waves and ripples (-were-)
Wrapping all around her,
All around her,
Wind in her hair.

She floats away,
She won't stay
And I pray
She comes back one day...

Sea Queen,
Sea Queen,
Can't you see that you're so flitty?
Sea Queen,
You're so mean,
And without fins you can't swim far.

She didn't know what to do
(-her hopes just sank right through-)
And that's sad.

Sea Queen,
Sea Queen,
Can't you see that you're so flitty?
Sea Queen,
You're so mean,
And without fins you can't swim to your star.
 



 

Author notes

To the tune of Eisley's "Sea King"

Original song can be previewed at: www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/B0000JMLU8/qid=1117565197/sr=2-2/ref=pd_bbs_b_2_2/102-9975574-6706507
Written May 29th, 2005

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  • driveby-romance
    February 23, 2006
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    Ha! That's awesome!

  • Pen and Ink
    October 8, 2005
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    I like this version of "Sea King" of Eisley. Nice to know a fellow Eisley lover!


  • Eye Sea
    July 29, 2005
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    Musical

    These are lyrics arn't they. Well, they're good.


  • MelodiousMe
    May 29, 2005
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    haha i knew it i heard the tune of that song the moment i started reading it!!! haha its great and very talented good jod bro:-D


  • Blind-Ambition
    May 29, 2005
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    great

    This is a really good piece. I like the repitition. The imagrey is great, as always. Good work.

  • marrow
    May 29, 2005
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    I can't remember hearing this song before, but I was still able to appreciate this piece. Everything tied in so well, together. As always, it was a great job, Greg.

    - Justin

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