Completely Lost
Before being found
Strayed to far
before coming back
Messed Everything up
Before getting on track
were extremely late
to find yourself on time
Locked Everything out
Just to open the door
Learn to love
and cast away hate
Asked a question
to receive an answer.
Feeling completely separate
before feeling like one.
Lost all belief
before finding your faith
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Written May 28th, 2005
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I always get this great feeling in my heart when I notice sincerity of faith in Christ in the words of another. This is such a lovely write, and you do have talent to convey the inner unafraid. A few errors [but nothing to do with the gist of the poem] need attention, but to me getting your message across is more important. Frans
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Very lovely cycle, a learning tribute to the humanness in us. Needs a spell check.
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This is a bit of truth, I think for everyone at one time or another... but, the most important is "finding your faith". That is the key to solving unanswered questions, unsolved problems, never being alone, loving all even those who do not seem to deserve your love, finding yourself when you thought you were lost forever and everything else needed in this life... I love this piece..... I would not have made it through this life without my faith! Thanks for sharing!!!!!!!
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u really have the talent to uplift. i am really diggin ur writing style
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i really love this poem. everything you said is so true. i really like how you portrayed it in this writing! keep it up
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Wow this is amazing and so true. I found God when I was lost. I was lost in hate,love,childhood,disillusionment...I seen no one for miles and miles...Then I seen God. Beautiful write!! There is no comfort like the comfort of knowing that you have faith, andthat faith will never fail, and there is nothing that it can't do. Thanks again!
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Love it, like all of your work. Haven't talked to you in a while, missed our chats. Good write! Love the opposites! It's very powerful! Keep up the fantastic work!
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I really like this poem...I liked how you used opposites it all blended well together
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I really like this poem. It flows well and although it's a bit short, it gets the main point across. The lines
'Learn to love
and cast away hate' reminds me of this quote I know. "The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Excellent poem. It was ended well.
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i know exactly what you mean with this poem especially like the last two lines. overall great poem! (again
) keep up the good work
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Read your poem
Enjoyed it so much
Touched me
Inside my soul
So glad I found
Someone like you
Who believes
Just as I do
Keep the Faith
You're doing great
Write another poem
I just can't wait
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Heh, I never had much faith, always one to believe in facts and the such, but I still enjoyed this!
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I enjoyed reading this poem the fact that it was about faith is something that is very dear to me. I liked the way you wrote this it was like there were opposites and that worked really really well. It was short, but kept my interest throughout.
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Very good write.
This was a good poem, I liked reading it. I can relate to it at the moment and therefor the poem is apreciated, because it made me realise I'm not lost. Thanks again! -
wow that is really good! keep up the good work
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WOW!! This is fantastic... I love it, i love it, i love it! . Its beautiful, easy to read, flows well and is just beautiful. It took me ages to dicide what to say in my comment b/c once id read your poem i was just sat going '
WOW '. Well done, this is fantastic and I really really enjoyed reading it.. infact i think ill go read it again! . Well done, keep writing. JESSxxx
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i like this poem...makes me realiZe that i went thru some tough obsticles but i eventually got back on my feet, so it shows that i didnt just give up as soon as everythin turned bad.
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this one i had to read twice i dont know why but i had to i liked it though...... i cant explain why (sad i know lol) but i really did.......
hillary*
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