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Gentleness of your touch

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To know the gentleness of your touch
takes me to heights I love so much
to be wrapped in your arms so tight
I never want to leave your sight
That’s because I love you so much.

Come be by my side as we journey
to sights of loves greatest beauty
your eyes they show me your soul
knowing your love for me is whole
we hold each other ever so closely.

I love the touch of your tender lips
swaying to the music with our hips
as we dance to the sound of guitars
softly embracing 'neath the stars
my heart races it's doing flips.

We take a leisurely stroll on the sand
my body tingles as you hold my hand
our bodies melt in a sweet embrace
as I reach up and caress your face
the moon shines on my wedding band.



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Written May 28th, 2005

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  • jenelda silver member
    October 12, 2005
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    Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem, I appreciate you dropping by.

    Jennifer

  • Brokenpen
    October 12, 2005
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    awesome write

    this was a great write
    filled with loving word
    so romantic..
    thank you for sharing your words with me
    i enjoyed this read.


  • sidewinder silver member
    August 29, 2005
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    romance that touches within those smiles ...
    one heartbeat at a time....
    found in passion reached by a gentle breeze.
    I did enjoy this!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    May 28, 2005
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    this is a very special poem that sings out with the love you possess. Your poetry is reflects the beauty you have within your soul. Reading this is very touching. Great work


  • jenelda silver member
    May 28, 2005
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    Thank you Vic, where's my 's


  • eternalpoet
    May 28, 2005
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    4 stars ****

    sorry to be late onn readin this poem.. by the way.. you going great..infact very great with your rhymes.. i love it..

    the emotions with which this poem is completey filled with are just too pure and too true... well the five line pattern too is a new cool one..

    nice write...
    thanks for sharing.. and best of luck in the contest

  • blind ecye dog
    May 28, 2005
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    I like the way you saved the bang on this til the last line. Very tender thoughts. REd


  • Sharkbaitoolala gold member
    May 28, 2005
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    AWESOME! Good luck!
    Sandra

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