Bridal
shyly smiling
at your soft whispering
at the memory of our joy
bashful!
Author notes
My first try at Cinquain. do let me know hoe ive done.
option 16
Written May 28th, 2005
A contest entry
- Cinquains ~ Series 2 by antique.
300 points, ended May 31, 2005, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I see the wedding night, or even before that, where these two souls meet and with all those youthful fears and desires combining to create a defining moment.
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Wunnerful
QT!
Its an inspiration 4 me to rite.
Though I read this long back, I fet I needed to comment and applaud.
Keep it going swan! -
fascinating
vw, ma'm great.bridal closes well with bashful,smiling goes well with joy, whispering stands alone tells all. great going.keep it up.great luck to u. -
Wow.this is so beautiful.well done,
keep up the good work!
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This is awesome .. the syllable count is correct and it's been beautifully written .. I understand it would fall under the honeymoon option .. but if you could just write your option number in the author's comments it would be appreciated
.. very nicely done .. thankyou so much for entering and i wish you the best of luck in the contest .. keep the ink flowing hun 
~Aimee
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