my eyes are shot, my dreams are broke
right now i can only scream to cope
i need a boost
of self esteem and hope
because the good fight
is a losing one...
i check my pulse, am i still here?
my main goal now - to instill fear
i burn up cartons and i kill beer
what can you do to me?
what can you do for me...
i try my best, to make it back
sooner or later gotta face the facts
loyalty and truth are the things i lack
no one is here for me...
no one can hear my plea...
burn your crosses, raise em high
...the smoke will rise to change the sky
you came to laugh, i came to cry
why can't i get away?...
no one is here today...
all i can do is pray
but no one can hear me pray...
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Written May 28th, 2005
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dark, and well written. what happened to the shit u wrote back in 04?
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mmm...
the feeling that something has gotta give, somewhere, somehow, in some way... feelings I don't think ur all alone in... *SIGHS*
we all need our escapes if but for a lil while. Spiff write as usual and am looking forward to reading more
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This was one of the best poems I've read lately, Keep up the good work
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This is an amazing write, You said alot within these lines, You spoke to many people with these words. I took you for arrogant and foolish,
Clearly I was wrong. My deepest ppologys. I am pleased I stopped over here. This will stay in My head for a long time, I love it. Great write. -
This is just too sad, darlin'! (And you're wrong, George! You have many people who are here for you, and care very much about you! And that's just on this site! I can only imagine how many people you must have there, around you, who love you, and care deeply for what happens to you!) I'm always here, George, should you need me! I hope you'll let me help, if I can! This was written to perfection, as usual; I just hate to think that you're in such pain!
Paula -
p3@ce
I can...
I hope you know if you ever need some one to talk to you can talk to me...
I miss chatin with you.... hope things are ok I'll hit you up later..... um I really wish i could call you but you don't give your number out plus long distance although my friends have free long distance... well anyways I'll hit u up later... great poem by the way I really like this....
"burn your crosses, raise em high
...the smoke will rise to change the sky
you came to laugh, i came to cry
why can't i get away?...
no one is here today..."
lateums
p3@ce out in a fattie
~kim much juggalette love to my juggalo
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You know you got your boy from C-town by your side. As for the piece, deep, rigid, and almost rock-ish. I think you're really maturing as a writer.
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I wish I could be around more for you George, I know it's been a while since you and I have talked but I know things will get better for you soon. Stay strong hun
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I promise I'm going to be there for you Georige.
And youre gonna be the happiest mofo out there.
I love you.
Jenn
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sweet
such a beautiful poem you have 'ere, it really is, its also slight disturbing and sent shivers down my spine, but its all good, you have worded it so stunningly, i really envy this piece, nice work, keep the poems rolling -
You Spoke In This Write...For Millions And Millions Of People.
All Ages, In Every Country...Or Planet
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This Weary Lil Write....Deserves A Praise, For It Not Only Is True...But Scripted Finely For The Readers To Relate. Take Care Of You....And I Hope Poetry Helps You,When I'm Feeling Down Or Sad...I Like To Deeply Read Others Writes, It Makes Me Feel Better!
Have A Blessed Day & Thank You For Sharing
Angel
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