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Thanks For Loving Me




I gaze upon your angel face
My heart beats in a rapid pace
Each thought of you, consumes my soul
Your love, in life, mends my heart whole

A gift from heaven's gracious skies
The one who weeps through pure, blue eyes
When you are near kisses you bring
And from afar love songs you sing

The warmth of whispers in my ear
Travels throughout my soul sincere
As we entwine our worlds of two
I sing, "I Can't Stop Loving You"

And as you touch me deeply dear
Wipe my forever flowing tear
Embrace the heart of love in me
And know my love you'll always be

Within our dreams of golden blue
Through midnight moons till morning dew
Know your the best for us as we
And thanks for always loving me





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Thanks for reading me, and your time, pen on poets!
Written May 27th, 2005

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  • Dixie Dawn gold member
    July 19

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    so beautiful, with such soul, and heart and love, you are so gifted with your poetry and blessed with a most wonderful eternal love I can tell....I love this one as all of yours dear brother....my heart to you, Dawn

  • siahaan
    March 10
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    =)


  • PowerOfLove
    June 6, 2005
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    Romantically Exquisite

    A beautiful muse for your lovely wife, bestowing such feelings of unconditional love, that will endure through all life's experiences. You have a very special gift here from Father God, and it is indeed rare for a partner to value what he has got and been given. Thank you for this. Take care,
    Heather


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 4, 2005
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    First I have to say I am so glad to see you back and posting again. This piece is outstanding! It has such tenderness and a very loving intimacy that is priceless, such unconditional love staring the reader in the face and warming the hearts. Truly exquisite hun. Blessings Always, Gypsy


  • Empathy-eyes
    June 2, 2005
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    Soo beautiful! Your love towards others must be so strong to pen all these wonderful love poems. I'm still in awe of your ability to so freely express one of life's most powerful emotions, and you have such a sweet soul to thank those who love you. Excellent, I enjoyed the read.

    K
    Edited on Jun 02, 9:44 because ''.


  • blueyezcryin
    June 1, 2005
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    Sweet and beautiful

    Wow, another beautiful heartfelt write. Your words are so amazing, wish I could get my feelings out like you do. Sorry to hear you weren't well, but glad to know you are doing better. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work.
    ~Babygirl~


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    May 31, 2005
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    TRUE GOLD! Beautifully Penned!

    ~My Beloved Timothy~

    The golden blue sands of time have run out
    And when I’m up your down and when you’re down I’m up
    Seems we sip our love potion number nine from the same eternal cup
    Someday you can show US your long and winding road of love

    Gazing upon a beautiful and gracious song of love
    Heaven sent from up above penned in your velvet gloves
    Sometimes it’s better for US to go underground to be found
    Will life ever change in our music in the pouring rain?

    I’ve gone up and down around and around
    And now I’m found in your angelic sounds
    I recall warmly we shall feed the hungry and rain upon the barren fields
    Oh tell me is love warm and real as you sing I can’t stop loving you
    As we have so much to do in our daily lives golden blue

    Darling there is a place in grace for tender souls as us
    As you sing you touch me in the seas of eternity
    What is to be, times past and the future is here at last
    I shall wipe your flowing tears darling rise miles above the fears

    Thanks For Loving US as I wonder around the carasoul of time
    Eloquence forever is a heart beating in the love of the divine
    The price of loving is the price of sharing your dreams today
    And the price of our love has taken roots in skies of yesterday

    Thank you for the love you give to bless this place
    And life I live remember this I swear to you
    All you give comes back to you someday somewhere
    Dreams do come true to the tune of I can’t stop loving you.

    Beautifully Penned Once again my new old friend
    In your timeless grace and never ending passion
    As you light the four winds upon terras shores forevermore
    Somewhere in the midnight light you will touch the morning dew

    Where there is a found place where all dreams do then come true.
    If you touch my inner being in the rains we may change
    If you touch my heartstrings together we can dance and sing
    And once again now that I have to leave you in your kisses afar

    Get to know that you’ve been loved and loved deeply
    You have so many warm whisper that arrive your way
    As I sing in the union of the sun and the moon
    We have finally touched down to the tune of I can’t stop loving you.

    ~All the best to you and yours, Love, Hugs, Kisses, Sharron~

    5/31/05 11:47 PM
    Edited on May 31, 10:56 p.m. because ''.


  • Whispering Winds
    May 31, 2005
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    Timothy,
    This is such a wonderful poem of your love. Its wonderful to have someone in your life that loves you so...Like an angel from above...An angel you shall never let go.

    I know of this love all too well, for now I have it in my life. A wonderful man that loves me for my heart, not what he sees, but who I am. The love I have longed for so many years. You always said it would happen, and once again my friend, you were right. Thanks for sharing this beautiful write, and reminding me of the love of my life...
    Excellent work my friend.

    Much love to you and yours,
    Tammy


  • Frozentearz
    May 29, 2005
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    ahhhh I love to read a write that comes
    pouring from a heart, I love your choice of
    expression with words, And how it made me the
    reader feel the love you hold for your loved one
    This was a pure joy to read,
    Blessings
    ~FrozenTears


  • Wandika gold member
    May 28, 2005
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    Excellent and lovely poem. Good structure, rhyme and rhythm. An enjoyable read.


  • ceegeeess
    May 28, 2005
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    Oh! lovely love in words!

    lovely heart you do have dear , poetic weaver of love and romance,tough it must be not to love you! Embrace the heart of love in me
    And know my love you'll always be'! I wish that I open your heart and grab all love you possess in the four chambers of your heart!LOLpen on 'love bird', dear brother!your pen does have ink of sweet love!


  • Sunkissedrose
    May 28, 2005
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    I am hoping this means you are doing better, seeing as how you are now up and about. This poem was beautiful, I wonder if you ever tire of me saying that? I wish I had a more eloquent word to describe your poetry, and the feelings I get when I read it. I know these words aren't penned for me, but reading them, it's almost like they are, your poetic heart is that darn good. I hope that you are better, and that you pen some more great works soon.

    Love always your Sis:
    ~Carrie
    (a dozen roses, to make you smile)


  • Rose Patrick
    May 28, 2005
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    Timothy,I wish that you could teach me to write with such a God given sence of beauty. You poem always amaze me with there beaauty and grace.You know that I alway look to your poem when I want to see beauty and style and grace. you have inspried me to write and incorage me whn other have told me I could not write because of my English being so bad.I thank you so much. Thank to you and your incoragement I now have book that are being published. but this poem is I think got to be one of your very best. This poem touch me heart and that is a fact. thank you for shareing such beauty with us all


  • estelm4
    May 28, 2005
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    Excellent!!

    Wow!!!!!
    Amazing poem!!!

    so glad to see youre writing again- means youre better.

    The rythm is perfect, the rhymes are beautifully smooth...
    awe inspiring!
    the lines:
    "I gaze upon your angel face"
    and
    "A gift from heaven's gracious skies"

    so sweeet!!!!
    an angel of love...


    "When you are near kisses you bring
    And from afar love songs you sing"

    Always, truly, deeply, forever...


    "And as you touch me deeply dear
    Wipe my forever flowing tear
    Embrace the heart of love in me
    And know my love you'll always be"

    ---> I loved this verse!!! each touch brings you closer to each of her thoughts, what a way to put it...

    "Embrace the heart of love in me"- lovely line- it gives atleast ten ways of interpretation...
    Embrace me, love me, embrace my heart and claim my soul-

    Awesome!


  • Mary O gold member
    May 27, 2005
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    Such a lovely, heartfelt poem, Tim. By what others have written I'm to understand you've been ill or something? I'm sorry I didn't know. I wish you well and all things good. Take care. Love,
    ~Mary O


  • maryannde gold member
    May 27, 2005
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    Seems many prayers have been answered tonight. Timothy is writing again, which hopefully means you are feeling a bit better.
    Sweet poetry my friend.

    Hugs and love...
    Mary Ann


  • Maureen silver member
    May 27, 2005
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    So nice to read one of your beautiful poems again! Hope you are feeling a lot better!!!

    Much Love,
    ♥ Maureen

  • Stella Shall
    May 27, 2005
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    Beautiful poem, very sweet to the ears and mind


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    May 27, 2005
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    Beautiful Timothy!! It is good to see you up and about. I take it you are better now? I hope so. I've missed you lately. Great to see you back penning such lovely poems again.

    ~Lyrical

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