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Never Say Never

Never say I love you,
if it isn't really there.
Never talk about feelings,
if you really don't care.
Never hold my hand,
if you're gonna break my heart.
Never say you're gonna,
if you do not plan to start.
Never look into my eyes,
because all you do is lie.
Never say hello if you really mean goodbye.
If you really mean forever,
then please say you'll try...
Never say never..
because never makes me cry.

Author notes

A bit cheesy, but hey... this is the first real thing I've written in months...
Written May 27th, 2005

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  • Suicide Girl 169
    May 28, 2005
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    oh my goddess, this is how i feel about jordan.....good wording..


  • strawberryz-n-cream
    May 27, 2005
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    This is a really good poem. I can relate to it and I really like it. Great job keep up the good work!